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The Hero's Journey pattern (also known as the Monomyth) is the template upon which the vast majority of successful stories and Hollywood blockbusters are based upon. Our detailed deconstruction of hundreds of successful stories and Hollywood blockbusters has revealed more than 510 stages of the Hero's Journey that you need to know about...

 

"...so to roll out successful stories and screenplays, superimpose your situation over this 510+ stage structure."

"...what you're doing is using the structure to pull the hero through his (or her) journey..."

"...it is the pulling through the journey that induces the hero's transformation......a story is transformation..."

"...by pulling your hero through this journey, you cause him (or her) to detach from the Ordinary World and Ordinary Self and attach to the New World and New Self. And then to detach from the New World and New Self and become the Master of Two Worlds and Selves..."

"...this structure is the process of transformation. There is a psychological journey that is mirrored by a physical journey. That is why you often see darkness, rain, thunder and lightning during the stage of the Near Death Experience, for example. By pulling the hero through a physical experience, you are stimulating a psychological transformation. In the beginning the hero will be dressed one way, after being pushed through some stages of the journey, the psychological change will reflect in clothing, behaviour, attitudes and beliefs."

"...it is the undergoing of the journey that provides the hero with the capacity to conquer those challenges that were previously unconquerable..."

 

Advantages of attaining a truly deep understanding of the Hero's Journey, Transformation and Detachment and Attachment include...

 

You learn to write stories quickly and effectively. You don't waste months trying to figure out what to do. If you work in TV, you'll be asked to produce effective stories very quickly - within a week, for example. You get the ability to quickly produce many first draft screenplays and then decide which stories you like and which ones you want to work further with and which ones you want to sell.

A script editor or agent may say "we are seeking this type of story." You will be able to quickly write it and sell them it. Or you may think that the next academy award winner is going to be "Slumdog Millionaire in Somalia." You will be able to write the first draft of a story like that quickly.

 

Understanding this template is a priority for screen and story writers.

 

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Think You Know the Hero's Journey (Monomyth)!?!?

You may be familiar with some aspects of the Hero's Journey; you may think you know it. But you don't.

It is far, far more complex than the basic stages below (The Call to Adventure, Refusal of the Call, Supernatural Aid, The Crossing of the First Threshold, The Belly of the Whale, The Road of Trials, The Meeting with the Goddess, Woman as the Temptress, Atonement with the Father, Apotheosis, The Ultimate Boon, Refusal of the Return, The Magic Flight, Rescue from Without, The Crossing of the Return Threshold, Master of the Two Worlds, Freedom to Live).

There is much, much more that needs to be mastered: Transformation, the Losing and Gaining of Capacities, Detachment and Attachment, Movement through the Many Worlds, the Many Selves... and more...

In fact, the terms "Hero's Journey" or "Monomyth" are almost misnomers, as they imply only one element of the greater whole.

Misconceptions about the Hero's Journey abound. We have met educators that have a frightening lack of understanding of it. It is likely that you suffer from similar misconceptions. Your best bet is to unlearn what you have learned; start over. You will not be able to write a successful screenplay unless you do. Because every successful movie and story we have encountered follows this pattern. Learn more about this in our free sample.

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Situation over Structure

The following images show how detailed the mapping of situation over structure [of successful and effective stories] can be. Further, the technique does not diminish character and story quality:

 

Christopher Robin (Winnie the Pooh) and Mowgli (The Jungle Book)

 

Mowgli (The Jungle Book) and Arthur (The Sword in the Stone)

 

Elephants in The Jungle Book and Robin Hood

 

Maid Marion (Robin Hood) and the Duchess (Aristocrats)

 

Snow White and Maid Marion (Robin Hood)

 

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The Hero's Journey and Transformation

The Hero's Journey is the template upon which the vast majority of successful stories and Hollywood blockbusters are based upon. In fact, we have not come across a [Hollywood] story that does not conform to this template, though there are slight differences between pre and post [around] 1950 output. Understanding this template is a priority for story or screenwriters.

Our 510+ stage Hero's Journey:

Taps into unconscious expectations the audience has regarding what a story is and how it should be told. You subconsciously revert to this template when you differentiate between good and bad stories.

Lays out the universal structural template upon which situations are superimposed. The movies you have seen may look different, but they are all constructed, almost sequence by sequence, in exactly the same way. They are simply alternate situations superimposed over the same structure. This is far more involved than simply three or four acts, plot points, mid point and so on.

Gives you a tangible process for building and releasing dissonance (establishing and achieving catharses, of which there are usually three, four or more).

Tells you what to write. For example, at a certain stage of the story, the focus should be on moving your Hero from the Deep Ordinary World to the Edge of the Ordinary World.

Lays out the movement between Worlds. There is a difference between the Deep Ordinary World, Edge of the Ordinary World, New World, Deep New World etc.

Lays out the process of Transformation. The function of the Journey is to induce a Transformation.

Lays out the Process of Detachment and Attachment. Every Hero goes through the process of detachment from the Ordinary World and Ordinary Self and attachment to the New World and New Self and then further.

Lays out the process of confrontation and conquest of the Four Core Challenges in the correct order. The Four Core Challenges are separate and distinct from the Multiple Catharses.

Lays out the process of Adaptation in the New World. It is enlightening to regard the development within the New World as adaptation.

Helps you understand the terminology and metaphors. The Hero's Journey is a root fairytale (do not be misled by the term "fairytale"; this does not mean that it only applies to fairytale type stories - this template is universal and applies to the most gritty, down to earth stories you may think of. See the latest, free sample file (zipped Adobe PDF file)).

Provides you with effective worksheets that allow you to quickly extrapolate an idea into a step outline to i) see if it has traction, ii) keep a record of it and iii) develop it before committing to a words-on-paper first draft. Once you understand the 510+ stage Hero's Journey, it is simply a matter of superimposing your situation over the worksheet or template structure.

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Table of Contents (of this web page)

Think you know the Hero's Journey (Monomyth)!?!?
Hero's Journey
Hero Archetypes
Heroine's Journey

Inciting Incident
Ordinary World
Call to Adventure
Interdiction / Refusal of the Call
Supernatural Aid
First Threshold
Belly of the Whale
Physical Separation
Transformation Mentor
Trials, Transformation and The Great Cave Complex
Meeting the Oracle and Ideal
Seizing the Sword
Night Sea Journey
Death or Near Death Experience
Rebirth
Atonement with the Father
Apotheosis
Ultimate Boon
Refusal of the Return
Magic Flight
Rescue from Without
Crossing the Return Threshold
Final Conflict
Master of the Two Worlds
Freedom to Live
AfterLife Act

Archetypes
Who or What is the Hero?
The Complexity Argument
What is a [Hollywood] Story?
Screenplays versus Novels
How to Write a Successful Story or Screenplay. Earning an Income from Writing
Four Core Challenges
Plots
Multiple Final Catharses
Transformation Cycle and Numbers [3,4,5,7]
Why the Hero's Journey Doesn't Suck: Correcting Misconceptions

Testimonials
Improve your Creativity
Creativity and Time Pressure
The Value of Structure

 

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Deconstructed Films, Stories, Movies, Sitcoms

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Below are a few hundred basic, first-draft, highly simplified story deconstructions. You cannot fully understand these stories using these deconstructions (to do that, you should order accurate, detailed deconstructions from here). Nevertheless, you get more out of the deconstructions if you watch the films simultaneously.

These basic, first-draft, highly simplified story deconstructions illustrate that a) all these stories have the same structural core: there in only one story and that is the pattern of the Complete Hero's Journey...more than 510 stages of the journey you need to know about..., b) the Hero's Journey fit, b) the rigid structure that all stories conform to and c) the diversity and novelty that can be derived from a core template.

In all of the deconstructed stories, there is a movement between Worlds. See the free sample file or buy the Complete Hero's Journey..

In all of the deconstructed stories, a Transformation occurs. Sometimes the Transformaton is overt (Dances with Wolves, 1990) and sometimes subtle (Jaws, 1975). Transformation occurs, without exception, as a result of passing through [some or all of] the stages of the Complete Hero's Journey...more than 510 stages of the journey you need to know about...

In all of the deconstructed stories, there is detachment and attachment. The Hero detaches from the Ordinary (Old) World and Old Self and attaches to a New World and New Self. Then the Hero moves beyond this to become a Master of Two Worlds and Selves. See the advanced worksheets.

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Though the story may not pass through a stage of the Hero's Journey, elements of that stage may be present. For example, it is most common for a Mentor to give the Hero a Magical Gift, however, in The English Patient (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1996), Hana picks up a necklace [from the ground] at that stage of the Journey; in Gladiator (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 2000), Maximus picks up a statuette [from the mantelpiece] at that stage of the Journey.

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40 Year Old Virgin (2005)
Alien (1979)
Amadeus (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1983)
American Beauty (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1999)
American Splendor (2003)
American Werewolf in London (1981)
Annie Hall (1977)
Back to the Future (1985)
Bagdad Cafe (1987)
Beautiful Mind (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 2001)
Beverly Hills Cop (1984)
Blade Runner (100 Greatest Films, 1982)
Braveheart (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1995)
Bullitt (1968)
Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid (1969)
Capote (2005)
Casablanca (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1943)
Chicago (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 2002)
Chinatown (1974)
Chopper (2000)
Citizen Kane (100 Greatest Films, 1941)
Color of Money (1986)
Color Purple (1985)
Commando (1985)
Constant Gardener (2005)
Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon (Academy Award Winner Best Film Nominee, 2000)
Dances with Wolves (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1990)
Dead Poets Society (Academy Award Nominee Best Film, 1989)
Deer Hunter (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1978)
Die Hard (1988)
Dirty Dozen (1967)
Dirty Harry (1971)
El Cid (1961)
Elizabethtown (2005)
Empire Strikes Back (100 Greatest Films, 1980)
English Patient (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1996)
ET - The Extra Terrestrial (100 Greatest Films, 1982)
Failure to Launch (2006)
Fargo (1996)
Fiddler on the Roof (Academy Award Nominee Best Film, 1971)
Fistful of Dynamite (1971)
Forrest Gump (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1994)
Four Weddings and a Funeral (Academy Award Nominee Best Film, 1994)
From Here to Eternity (Academy Award Winner, 1953)
French Connection (1971)
Get Carter (1971) [the superior English version]
Get Shorty (1995)
Ghandi (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1982)
Ghostbusters (1984) [Hero's Journey, basic]
Gladiator (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 2000)
Godfather (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1972)
Goldfinger (1964)
Good Night and Good Luck (Academy Award Nominee Best Film, 2005)
Good, the Bad and the Ugly (1966)
Goodfellas (Academy Award Best Film Nominee, 1990)
Graduate (1967)
Great Escape (1963)
Greatest Story Ever Told (1965)
Groundhog Day (1993)
Harder they Fall (1956)
Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire (2005)
History of Violence (2005)
Hooper (1978)
Ice Age 2: The Meltdown
Incredibles (2004)
[In the] Heat of the Night (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1967)
Italian Job (1969)
Jarhead (2005)
Jaws (100 Greatest Films, Academy Award Nominee Best Film, 1975)
Jungle Book (1967)
Jurassic Park (1993)
Kaalia (Bollywood, 1981)
King Kong (2005)
Last Emperor (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1987)
Lawrence of Arabia (1962)
Lord of the Rings: The Fellowship of the Ring (2001)
Lord of War (2005)
Magnificent Seven (1960)
Manhatten (1979)
Matrix (1999)
Memoirs of a Geisha (2005)
Men in Black (1997)
Midnight Cowboy (Academy Award Winner, 100 Greatest Films, 1969)
Million Dollar Baby (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 2004)
Mission Impossible (1996)
[Chronicles of] Narnia: The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe (2005)
Oceans Eleven (2001)
[An] Officer and a Gentleman (1982)
Omen (1976)
Once were Warriors (1994)
One Flew Over The Cuckoos Nest (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 100 Greatest Films, 1975)
On the Waterfront (100 Greatest Films, 1954)
Out of Africa (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1985)
Papillon (1973)
Planet of the Apes (Greatest Films, 1968)
Platoon (Academy Award Best Film, 1986)
Psycho (1960)
Pulp Fiction (Academy Award Nominee Best Film, 1994)
Raging Bull (Academy Award Best Film Nominee, 1980)
Raiders of the Lost Ark (1981)
Red River (100 Greatest films, 1948)
Rocky (Academy Award Best Film, 1976)
Romancing the Stone (1984)
Scarface (1983)
Shakespeare in Love (Academy Award Winner, Best Film, 1998)
Shawshank Redemption (Academy Award Best Film Nominee, 1994)
Schindler's List (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1993)
Shine (Academy Award Nominee Best Film, 1996)
Shrek (2001)
Silence of the Lambs (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1991)
Sleepless in Seattle (1993)
Smokey and the Bandit (1977)
Sound of Music (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1965)
Spiderman 2 (2004)
Spartacus (1960)
Star Wars (100 Greatest Films, 1977)
Sting (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1973)
Superman (1978)
Sweet Smell of Success (1957)
Syriana (2005)
Taxi Driver (100 Greatest Films, 1976)
Terms of Endearment (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1983)
Thelma and Louise (1991)
Third Man (100 Greatest Films, 1949)
Tin Men (1987)
Titanic (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1997)
Tootsie (Academy Award Nominee Best Film, 1982)
Top Gun (1986)
Trading Places (1983)
Transamerica (2005)
Tsotsi (2005)
Unforgiven (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1992)
Vertigo (1958)
Walk the Line (2005)
Wall Street (1987)
War of the Worlds (2005)
Wild Bunch (100 Greatest Films, 1969)
Wizard of Oz (Academy Award Best Film Nominee, 1939)
When Harry met Sally (1989)
[It's a] Wonderful Life (Academy Award Nominee Best Film, 100 Greatest Films, 1946)
X-Men (2000)

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Sitcom Structure

Various theories differentiate between sitcoms and screenplays / movies. After deconstructing many sitcoms (not all are listed here), we are only comfortable making two statements:

Sitcoms are simply stories told with jokes.

Sitcoms follow the Hero's Journey template. As they are stories, this is not surprising.

Desperate Housewives
My Name is Earl
Shameless
Will and Grace
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Hero Archetypes

There are various types of Hero: a) the Good, Willing Hero (Star Wars, 1977), b) the Good, Unwilling Hero (Shawshank Redemption, 1994), c) the Anti-Hero or Villain (Raging Bull, 1980; Goodfellas, 1990 etc) and so on.

Nevertheless, their stories all mirror the Hero's Journey template. The difference between Hero, Anti-Hero and other variations simply lies in situation, motivation and result. These are simply Hero Archetypes. See Complete and Advanced Archetypes.

 

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Heroine's Journey

It is a mistake to believe that the Heroine's Journey is separate and distinct from the Hero's Journey.

The Journey is about Journey, Transformation, Detachment and Attachment, Movement between Worlds, Movement from one Conscious State to another etc – these are not gender specific:

In Million Dollar Baby (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 2004), though Maggie and Frankie both have their challenges, the process towards apotheosis and beyond is the same.

The Hero is often a female:

Karen in Out of Africa (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1985)

Clarice in Silence of the Lambs (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1991)

Thelma and Louise (1991)

Sally in When Harry met Sally (1989)

The Hero and Romantic Challenge roles are often reversed:

In Breakfast at Tiffany's (1961) , Holly is a Hero and Paul is the Romantic Challenge.

In Erin Brockovich (1999) , Erin is the Hero and George is the Romantic Challenge.

 

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Inciting Incident

Often separate and distinct from the Call to Adventure. Can be used as a tool to introduce the Greater Antagonism, the Push Force, Polarisation and more:

In Harry Potter: The Goblet of Fire (2005), we initially meet Voldemort in Harry's dream.

In Shrek (2001), the cartoon characters are being rounded up.

In Gran Torino (2008), the gangbangers antagonize Thao.

 

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Ordinary World and Ordinary Self

Where we learn crucial details about the Hero, his or her True Nature, Capabilities and more:

In Gladiator (2000), Maximus takes time to feel the tall grass.

In War of the Worlds (2005), we meet Ray Ferrier at work and at home.

In Annie Hall (1977), Alvie Singer worries about everything in New York.

In Beverly Hills Cop (1984), Axel is a cop in Detroit.

 

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Call to Adventure

Where the Hero is pushed or pulled out of the Ordinary World. Often brought by a Herald. Much happens here:

In The Matrix (1999), Trinity tells Neo he is really searching for the Matrix.

In Beverly Hills Cop (1984), Axel is motivated by Mikey's assassination.

In Back to the Future (1985), Doc calls and tells Marty to be at Twin Pines Falls.

 

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Interdiction

The threat of punishment for leaving the Ordinary World and Ordinary Self and moving forward:

In Raiders of the Lost Ark (1981), Marcus warns Indy about the dangers of the Ark.

In Get Carter (1971), Carter's boss warns of the northern gangs.

In Gladiator (2000), Marcus Aurelius warns of the dangers of being Emperor.

 

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Supernatural Aids

Magical Mentors, Spells and Gifts (metaphors for forms of assistance) provide guidance and direction.

In Million Dollar Baby (2004), Maggie needs Frankie to start winning.

In The Empire Strikes Back (1980), Luke needs Yoda to teach him the ways of the Force.

In Raging Bull (1980), Vickie lures Jake away from his wife and Ordinary World.

 

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First Threshold

Much happens in the First Threshold. For one thing, this is a place of significant, but not deep, change:

In Lawrence of Arabia (1962), Lawrence gains the King's trust.

In The Matrix (1999), Neo learns martial arts.

In Raging Bull (1980), Jake and Vickie become an item.

 

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Belly of the Whale

Much happens in the Belly of the Whale. Where there is encouragement into the Deeper New World:

In The Harder they Fall (1956), Art tells Eddie what he's getting into.

In Thelma and Louise (1991), Thelma takes her time deciding whether to go with Louise to Mexico.

In Revolutionary Road (2008), the boss likes the memo to Toledo, encouraging Frank to stay with the firm.

 

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Physical Separation

Where the Hero is forced, pushed or pulled into the Deeper New World:

In Star Wars (1977), Luke et al have to blast their way out of Mos Isley.

In Gladiator (2000), Maximus is taken away by the slave caravan.

In Syriana (2005), Prince Nasir repeatedly calls Bryan.

In King King (2005), Carl forces the ship to leave with Jack on it.

 

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Transformation Mentor

A Transformation Mentor may assist the Hero through one or many of the trials:

In Gladiator (2000), Proximo sees to it that Maximus becomes a Gladiator.

In Memoirs of a Geisha (2005), Mamaha is responsible for Sayuri's transformation into Geisha.

In Gran Torino (2008), Walt helps Thao act more manly.

 

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Trials and Transformation

The Hero, reluctantly or willingly, begins the partial dissolution of the Old Self.

In Goodfellas (1990), Karen meets the wives.

In Educating Rita (1983), Rita transforms into a student.

In Al Pacino Scarface (1983), Tony establishes himself as a dope dealer.

In Erin Brockovich (1999), Erin becomes the centre-piece of the case against PG&E.

 

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Meeting the Oracle and Ideal

Where the Hero encounters an Ideal, the Sword and the push to Seize it.

In Carlito's Way (1993), Carlito helps Kleinfeld out of loyalty.

In The Godfather (1972), Michael sees Appollonia.

In Spiderman 2 (2004), the doctor tells Peter Parker that he has a choice.

 

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Seizing the Sword

The Sword is a tangible that represents a number of significant intangibles.

In The Godfather (1972), Michael marries Apollonia and becomes a de facto Sicilian.

In A Fistful of Dynamite (1971), Juan takes out the bridge and becomes a de facto rebel.

In Scarface (1983), Tony takes over Frank's empire and becomes the boss.

 

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Night Sea Journey

One function of the Night Sea Journey is to attain a Magical Gift from the Old (Another) World,

In Dances with Wolves (1990), John goes back to the fort to dig out the guns.

In Rambo (1984), Rambo steals the truck with the explosives.

In Lord of the Rings: Return of the King (2004), Frodo is saved by the magical vest.

 

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Near Death Experience

Death is a prelude to Rebirth.

In An Officer and a Gentleman (1982), Worley commits suicide.

In Unforgiven (1992), Clint Eastwood is beaten to a pulp by Gene Hackman.

In A Fistful of Dynamite (1972), Dr. Villega is captured, tortured and forced to reveal the identities of his associates. John recalls his back-story and a similar situation in Ireland. Rod Steiger faces an execution at the hands of a firing squad.

 

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Rebirth

Where the complete New Self comes into being.

In Dances with Wolves (1990), John Dunbar wears the complete Sioux uniform.

In The Harder they Fall (1956), Toro now speaks English fluently.

In Syriana (2005), Arash says goodbye to his father and becomes the archetypal suicide bomber.

 

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Atonement with the Father

There are many aspects of this and it can be interpreted in many ways, one being: an incompatibility (re)surfaces between the New Self and the Old Self.

In Dances with Wolves (1990), John has become a fully fledged Sioux, yet he knows the White Men are coming.

In Out of Africa (1985), Karen wants Denys not to keep disappearing.

In Casablanca (1943), Victor tells Rick what he would do for Ilsa.

 

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Apotheosis

There are many aspects of this and it can be interpreted in many ways. One element of it is the seminal insight , an illumination, an epiphany:

In Casablanca (1943), Rick's insight is that if you love someone, you sacrifice yourself for their happiness. That sacrifice can include selling your most prized material possessions (he sells his bar), allowing your love to find happiness in another's arms (he ultimately allows Ilsa to be with Victor), physical suffering (it is likely that his ultimate actions will see him to a concentration camp), leaving attachments (he will have to leave Sam behind) and forced exile from home and heart (he will have to leave Casablanca). He learns this insight from both Ilsa and Victor, who are prepared to do the same for each other.

In The Shawshank Redemption (1994), Andy Dufresne's apotheosis is that you either get busy living or you get busy dying. He reaches that insight in the scene by the prison wall with Red (Morgan Freeman), but it is preceeded by the earlier insight that he will never get out of prison (Warden Norton will never let him go).

In Al Pacino Scarface (1983), Tony Montana's insight is that the rewards of the path he's chosen are not worth the spiritual price he is paying, expressed with the words (in the restaurant scene): "is this it? Is that what it's all about Manny? Eating, drinking, fucking, sucking," "no free rides in this world kid," "I lost my appetite," "is that what I worked for? With these hands? Is that what I killed for? For this?"

In Alien (1979), Ripley's apotheosis arrives during the conversation with Ash, the revived android. He tells her that the alien cannot be destroyed and that the military want it - this horror will be unleashed on the Earth unless she destroys it and the only way to do that is to nuke the Nostromo.

 

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Ultimate Boon

There are many aspects of this and it can be interpreted in many ways. One element of it is synergy:

In The Dirty Dozen (1967), Lee Marvin's challenge is to make his men operate as an effective unit. When Charles Bronson et al attain synergy, they overpower the Major's men in the war games sequence.

In Beverly Hills Cop (1984), Axel Foley, Taggart, Rosewood and Bogomil finally begin working together to tackle Victor Maitland.

In Alien (1979), Parker and Lambert fall into line under Ripley's command.

 

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Refusal of the Return

There are many aspects of this and it can be interpreted in many ways. One element of it is: there can be no return to the way things once were:

In Slumdog Millionaire (2008), Jamal will never trust Salim again.

In Erin Brockovoch (1999), Erin refuses to give up the case to Kirk Potter and be sidelined to her old Wolrd and Self.

In Y Tu Mama Tambien (2000), the boys sleep together. Things cannot be the same again.

 

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Magic Flight

This is the flight from the New World and New Self and contains an air of the supernatural.

In Raiders of the Lost Ark (1981), Indy swims to the submarine.

In Ali (2000), Ali runs through the village and sees the images of himself.

In Knocked Up (2007), the boys go to Vegas.

 

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Rescue from Without

Unresolved challenges pulls the Hero back. There are a number of variations.

In A Wonderful Life (1946), Clarence rescues and shows George Bailey what the world would have been like without him.

In Spiderman (2000), the Green Goblin kidnaps Mary Jane.

In Thelma and Louise (1991), Hal and the FBI catch up with the girls.

In The Harder they Fall (1956), Eddie persuades Toro to fight until he is paid.

 

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Crossing of the Return Threshold

It is not unusual for the Hero et al to return to familiar, yet changed, versions of Older Worlds and Older Selves:

In Star Wars (1977), Luke returns to the Death Star.

In Spiderman (2000), Peter returns to confront the Green Goblin.

In The Wrestler (2008), Randy comes out of retirement.

 

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Final Conflict

The Final Conflict is critically important with many, many essential aspects. This follows a familiar and similar pattern across genres. It encompasses Multiple Catharses, Impossible Dilemma, Unbearable Antagonism, Surpassing Peers, False Heroes, Hand-to-Hand Battle and much more:

In Annie Hall (1977), Alvie confronts Annie.

In Gladiator (2000), Commodus and Maximus battle.

In When Harry met Sally (2007), Harry runs to tell Sally he loves her.

In Die Hard (1988), John takes on Hans.

 

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Master of the Two Worlds and Selves

There are many aspects of this and it can be interpreted in many ways. One element of it is this: a synthesis of the Old and New Selves:

In The Godfather (1972), Michael tells Kay that he did not kill Carlo.

In Dances with Wolves (1990), John must leave the Sioux to spread the message to anyone who will listen.

In Educating Rita (1983), Rita recognises Dr Bryant's contribution to who she is.

Here, the Hero gains the ability to traverse all the Many Worlds.

In The Matrix (1999), Neo can stop and play with the bullets.

In Raiders of the Lost Ark (1981), Indy tries to warn the government of the power of the Ark.

 

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Freedom to Live

A State of Perfection, dissimilar from earlier States of Perfection, but perfect nonetheless, is temporarily restored.

In Alien (1979), Ripley relaxes and smiles with Jones the cat.

In Blade Runner (1982), Roy allows the bird to fly free.

In Raging Bull (1980), Jake pours champagne out over a mountain of glasses.

 

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AfterLife Act

The Reign, The Fall, the New Journey, The Ascendance, rise to Supernatural Aid or Mentor status, The Death, The Legend, The Rebirth and more continue the story:

In Raging Bull (1980), much happens after Jake retires from Boxing.

In Out of Africa (1985), we learn of Denys' grave, the lions and more.

In Conan the Barbarian (1982), Conan has a particular type of final reign.

 

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Who or What is the Hero?

There are a number of possible answers:

a) The Hero is the person with the most screentime - the person who has the most attention of the camera. There are many excellent films / stories where screentime is shared (When Harry met Sally (1989), Pulp Fiction (1994), Red River (1948) etc). So this answer is not quite satisfactory.

b) The Hero is the person that changes / transforms the most. This is inaccurate. In Back to the Future (1985), George McFly is the person who changes most. In Beverly Hills Cop (1984), Rosewood changes the most, not Axel Foley.

c) The Hero is the person who has his or her challenges resolved. This is also incorrect as other characters also have their challenges resolved. In Back to the Future (1985), Doc [the Mentor] also has a challenge: to survive the Libyan terrorists. This is just one example.

d) The Hero is the person who holds true to his / her deepest values. This is incorrect as the Hero's Journey is about Transformation: it is usual, in fact it is common, for the Hero to change his or her deepest beliefs.

e) The Hero is the person that passes through the stages of the Hero's Journey. The Hero does not always passes through [all or some of] the stages of the Hero's Journey (Red River (1948), Pulp Fiction (1994) etc).

f) The Hero is that person with whom we empathise with most. Not necessarily. In Blade Runner (1982), we empathise most with Roy, not Deckard.

g) The Hero is that person who does good, who is most altruistic. This ignores Antiheroes, Unwilling Heroes and other Hero archetypes.

h) The Hero s/he who makes a Sacrifice. Again, this is not quite satisfactory. Mentors, Shape Shifters commonly make a sacrifice (Obi Wan, Star Wars (1977) etc...).

i) The Hero is the Bringer of and Representative of The Changing. This is closer to a truth but not quite. Almost there. .

j) So what's the answer? You can't write a complete, successful story without knowing this. To find out, you'll need to buy the Complete Hero's Journey...more than 510 stages of the journey you need to know about....

 

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What is a [Hollywood] Story?

From the analysis of the above films:

a) In all of the above deconstructed stories, there is a movement between a number of Worlds. See the free sample file (zipped Adobe PDF file)

b) In all of the above deconstructed stories, a Transformation occurs. Sometimes the Transformation is overt (Dances with Wolves, 1990) and sometimes subtle (Jaws, 1975). ransformation occurs, without exception, as a result of passing through [at least some of] the stages of the Complete Hero's Journey.

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c) One or more characters conquer a number of challenges, all of which are framed within the parameters of the Complete Hero's Journey.

d) There is a distinct process of story closure. That is, multiple catharses close a story.

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Improve your Creativity

Creativity Management can seriously improve the quality and quantity of your creative output. Ironically, this topic is best understood in the senior business community - businesses continually need to be creative and innovative to maintain competitive advantage and solve a host of other issues. This topic is taken seriously by Harvard, Yale, Princeton et al and studied at the highest academic levels.

Critical insights will help you write better screenplays, for example:

a) The relationship between production and quality: it can be concluded with great confidence that quality of output is closely connected to sheer quantity. Moreover, the single best creative product tends to appear at that point in the career when the creator is being most prolific.

b) Separating creative from critical thinking: writing and editing are separate and distinct processes.

c) Forcing inspiration: screenwriters will often find that their best ideas occur while they are engaged in other projects.

d) Manipulating organisational culture and organisational structure to overcome blocks.

e) Achieving radical leaps through incremental productivity.

f) Avoiding and clarifying misconceptions: what exactly is originality? is there such a thing as a creative type?

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Screenplays versus Novels

We have no large sample data for this but the anecdotal evidence suggests that many novels also follow the Complete Hero's Journey...more than 510 stages of the journey you need to know about... template. Successful bestseller examples include:

The Kite Runner -- by Khaled Hosseini

The Bookseller of Kabul -- by Asne Seierstad

Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban (Book 3) -- by J.K. Rowling

 

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How to Write a Successful Story or Screenplay. Earning an Income from Writing.

First you have to get your head around the idea that there is really only one story. By that we mean this: every story you have ever seen or read is essentially an alternate situation superimposed, with individual style, over the same structure. The Godfather (1972), Slumdog Millionaire (2008), Brokeback Mountain (2005), Gladiator (2000), Annie Hall (1977) and every other successful story you have ever seen or read are all one and the same - various situations superimposed over the same structure. Spielberg, Lucas, Scorsese, Coppola, Cameron all use this structure. Shakespeare used this structure. Stories in the Bible, the Vedas, the Torah and the Koran use this structure. You should use this structure.

Second you have to understand what is meant by structure. It is more than simple three or four acts or plot points etc..., it is a consistent, complex process through which your characters are led that results in them resolving their initial challenges. Many people are resistant to the idea that stories are processes because they are influenced by the many creativity myths.

Third, you have to understand, on a very deep level, what that structure is. It is the 510 stages of the journey you need to know about... and, on a macro level, involves:

Movement through a number of Worlds.

Transformation from various Devolved Selves to an Ultimate Self.

Detachment from Older Worlds and Selves and Attachment to Newer Worlds and Selves.

The Making Explicit of Deficiencies and the Gaining of Capacities.

The Making Explicit of Challenges and the Laying Out of their Resolution.

much, much more...

Stop procrastinating...you will simply waste a lot of time writing poor quality stories and screenplays until you understand this structure. The 510+ stages of the Hero's Journey is what they should be teaching in creative writing and screenwriting classes. If you do not understand the process, you cannot succeed.

Fourth, you have to become adept with the structure, by superimposing various situations over it. The structure can be literal but it can also be highly metaphoric - it can take time to become flexible with the metaphors.

Fifth, once you have found a situation you are happy with, you develop your story by writing each sequence in your own, individual writing style. Once you have developed the competency, it is not necessarily that difficult: Sylvester Stallone wrote Rocky (1976) in three days, Joe Eszterhas wrote Basic Instinct (1992) in 13 days.

 

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Creativity and Time Pressure

There are two contrary arguments: a) time pressure stimulates creativity and b) time pressure reduces creativity. Both are true.

There are a number of forces at work:

Time pressure increases creative output. By forcing idea production, setting goals and incremental deadlines, a greater number of ideas are produced than if a “do your best” approach is taken. If a leader asks participants in an idea generating session to address a problem and think of at least 5 ideas every half an hour, then 80 ideas are produced by one individual and 1600 are produced by 20 individuals at the end of an average working day. This level of output is conscious and would not be produced normally.

Time pressure encourages prolific production and therefore the probability of generating good ideas increases. It can be said with great confidence that quality of output is closely related to quantity. The best single creative product tends to appear at that point in the career when the creator is being most prolific.

Forcing output pushes individuals along the experience curve, refines their methodology, builds competencies and knowledge and improves performance. Screenwriters know that they are likely to produce more, better quality work faster if they set themselves a schedule of a certain number of pages per day.

Motivation is critical to creativity. If a person is intrinsically motivated, time pressure may be a synergistic extrinsic motivator. If the person is not intrinsically motivated then it may turn out to be a non-synergistic extrinsic motivator, which reduces the level of engagement in the endeavour.

Short-term time pressure can be negative in that it does not allow the mind to engage in the endeavour at various cognitive levels. It does not allow rich ideas to formulate through the process of incubation. Intrinsically motivated individuals will benefit from short term time pressure and goals (sets cognitive forces in motion) and will generate richer ideas through incubation over the longer term.

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The Value of Structure

Structure, in its many forms, increases the quantity and quality of creative output. The golden rule is that originality emerges from structure:

a) Short term goals (incremental productivity) produce more output than a "do your best" approach. With specific regard to creative writing, writing four pages a day completes a words-on-paper first draft screenplay in one month. A "do your best" or "waiting for inspiration" approach can take months or years. Witness the untold number of people with unfinished manuscripts under their beds.

b) Work processes help to i) unblock the mind, ii) tap into tacit knowledge, iii) trigger the mind into working at various cognitive levels and iv) apply i) and ii) and iii) to the areas of problem identification, idea generation, idea selection, development and commercialisation.

c) Frameworks reduce complex problems into their component intellectual parts. Frameworks increase output by reducing complex problems into smaller, more manageable problem solving exercises. A similar idea is that problems, no matter how daunting, can be solved by breaking them into their constituent parts.

d) Templates, with specific regard to creative writing, are valuable as they are step-outlines. They are ready-made analyses of story structure; by using them writers can quickly expand an idea into a story. Past a critical threshold, the story then begins to dictate its own structure: thus originality emerges from structure.

e) Simply being prolific improves performance and quality. The single best creative product tends to appear at that point in the career when the creator is being most prolific.

f) Simply engaging in the tasks improves performance. Experience refines knowledge and methodology towards optimal levels.

g) Engagement stimulates the mind into working on problems at various cognitive levels and results in inspiration. Screenwriters often find that their best ideas come to them when they are in the middle of writing a screenplay.

h) Structure helps clearly identify complex problems and triggers incubation. Problems incubate until answers become apparent. Incubation tends to result in richer insights.

i) Engagement increases the incidence and frequency of problem identification and thus the incidence and frequency of insight.

j) Engagement (coupled with motivation) increases solution seeking, through active search for stimuli and intellectual cross-pollination through networks, bridging and collaboration.

k) Repeated engagement (coupled with motivation) triggers frame breaking; helps identify path dependencies and parochialism.

l) Radical shifts (novelty, originality) occur through sustained incremental change. By incrementally modifying output, the distance between the original and final versions increases. Radical shifts sometimes result from dramatic events or conditions but the vast number of gains accrue from continuous incremental improvement.

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Five Core Challenges

One or more characters conquer a number of challenges. There are Five Core Challenges: a) the Inner Challenge, b) the Romantic Challenge, c) the Outer Challenge and d) the Greater Antagonism, e) to find out what the Fifth Core Challenge is (you can't write a complete, successful story without knowing this), you'll need to buy the Complete Hero's Journey...more than 510 stages of the journey you need to know about...:

In Titanic (Academy Award Winner Best Film 1997; No. 1 All-Time USA Box-office with receipts of over $600,000,000), Rose's Inner Challenge is to overcome her commitment to her mother as well as Jack's lower status, her Romantic Challenge is Jack, her Outer Challenge is Cal and the Greater Antagonism is escaping the sinking ship.

In American Beauty (Academy Award Winner Best Film 1999), Lester Burnham's Inner Challenge is to feel good about himself, his Romantic Challenge is Angela, his Outer Challenge is his marriage with Carolyn and the Greater Antagonism is Col. Frank Fitts, US Marine Core.

In Top Gun (1986, receipts of $176,000,000), Maverick's Romantic Challenge is Charlie, his Inner Challenge is his personal and father's story, his Outer Challenge is getting over Goose's death and the Greater Antagonism is becoming Top Gun.

The Four Core Challenge categories can be viewed as classes:

In Tootsie (Academy Award Nominee Best Film 1982), Michael's Romantic Challenge is Julie, his Inner Challenge is represented by his penultimate line "I was a better man with you as a woman than I ever was with a woman as a man...I just gotta learn to do it without the dress...", his Outer Challenge is Ron [symbol of male condescension] and the Greater Antagonism is his problem that the network and fans thinks he's really a woman. But within the class of the Inner Challenge is Sandy and within the class of the Romantic Challenge are the attentions of Les and Van Horn.

It is common for major characters other than the Hero [most often the Romantic Challenge, Supernatural Aid, Shape Shifter] to have their own challenges:

In Gladiator (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 2000), Proximo and Lucilla both have their own demons to overcome.

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Plots

There is an argument between the One Story concept [that all stories are structured around the Hero's Journey] versus the concept of "Plots" [that there are, for example, a finite number of basic plots such as Rebirth, Tragedy, Rags to Riches].

The argument is misleading.

It is true that there is only One Story [the Hero's Journey] - you can see this by analysing our deconstructions of hundreds of successful Hollywood stories and analysing our Complete Hero's Journey.

The essence of story is transformation and the process of that transformation, at the root level, is the Hero's Journey. Moving on, there are a finite number of drivers that push (or pull) the transformation forward (for example, sometimes the push is external, sometimes it is internal etc). Each driver (or combination of) produces its own variable (Plot) of the Hero's Journey. For example, if the Hero is willing, there are increased obstacles and interdictions. If the Hero is unwilling, there are increased pushes or pulls forward. Learn more about Plots...

In other words, all "Plots," when deconstructed, can be reduced to the Hero's Journey / Transformation.

 

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Transformation Cycle

In many stories it is hard not to recognise the prevalence of sets of numbers. These relate to the stages or cycle of transformation.

The most common number notable is 3 [Goldilocks and the Three Bears; three visits to the giants castle in Jack and the Beanstalk; in The Matrix (1999), Morpheus introduces Neo to the Nebuchadnezzar, then introduces the crew and then shows him the Matrix through the console). Three [The Three Steps] is the most basic path to transformation: initiation, trial and transformation (terminology varies).

Four steps are also common: initiation, trial, transformation and demonstration.

Many effective screenplays utilise Five Steps: In Thelma and Louise (1991), Louise warms Thelma not to flirt with anyone; Thelma flirts with Harlan, Thelma gets drunk with Harlan, Harlan tries to rape Thelma, Louise shoots Harlan.

Transformation can be deconstructed into many more stages and ultimately, very much mirrors the Complete Hero's Journey.

 

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Multiple Final Catharses

Stories do not simply end. There is a very distinct process of catharses distribution. Successful stories end with three, four or more catharses – these catharses are separate and distinct from the Four Core Challenges.

In Die Hard (1988), there are many catharses, including: John rescuing his wife, defeating Hans and then Karl. Argyle also has his moment.

In Star Wars (1977), Vader is diverted, Luke strikes the shot, the Death Star explodes, Ben's voiceover comforts etc.

In Knocked Up (2006), Ben becomes assertive, neutralises Debbie, makes up with Alison etc.

 

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The Complexity Argument

You may think that 510+ stages are too many. We disagree.

There are essentially two types of structure:

a) Dumbed Down Structure. This sort of structure leads to oversimplification and results in three Act Structure, Four Act Structure, Plot Points and so on. These types of structures are virtually meaningless and useless for writing successful stories and screenplays. They are an easy way out and do not yield any significant nor practical truths.

b) Intelligent Structures. Any basic analysis of even a small number of successful stories yields a couple of hundred commonalities. It may require more brain power to get your head around this structure, but you arrive at more useable and valuable truths. With this structure, you can actually write stories.

 

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Why the Hero's Journey Doesn't Suck: Correcting Misconceptions

The 510+ stage Hero's Journey is like evolution – it is the obvious truth but many people resist it.

The following subsection addresses some of the common criticisms thrown at the Hero's Journey and story structures and creative writing etc... in general.

 

Criticism 1: It's formula.

The Hero's Journey is not a formula, it is a structure that guides the process of transformation, attachment or detachment, liberation etc. It is a pattern that reveals the process of unfolding a story, something that 99.9% writers do not know how to do. It shows you how to turn an idea into a story. It shows you how to appeal to an audience, which have subconscious expectations. It is the road map that the novice writer is unconsciously trying to find.

This criticism is a catch-all for any creative structure. It betrays a lack of understanding of story, creativity itself and the value of structure.

 

Criticism 2: It discourages originality.

The word "originality" is itself inappropriate. It implies a complete break with the past, which is never the case (it only seems so). Most of which seems original is a cumulative and incremental evolution of that which has been before. And it often only seems original to those with an untrained eye.

The Hero's Journey does not discourage originality. All the greatest stories (past and present) use it as a core pattern and those stories can hardly be described as unoriginal. Not only do Spielberg, Coppola, Lucas, and Scorsese follow this pattern, but Shakespeare did too. Their stories can hardly be described as unoriginal. Every Academy Award winner has followed this pattern. Those stories can hardly be described as unoriginal.

 

 

Criticism 3: Why is one hero so special anyway?

This betrays a serious lack of understanding of the Hero's Journey.

The Hero is not necessarily a single individual. The Hero is representative of The Process and The Changing and many individuals or groups go through the process. For example, in The Incredibles (2004) , the whole family goes through the process. In Little Miss Sunshine (2006) , the whole family goes through the process. A pair is also common: Thelma and Louise (1991) , When Harry met Sally (1989) . See Who or What is the Hero .

 

Criticism 4: The Hero is always a dude.

The Hero is not always a dude. There are many successful stories where the Hero is female: Million Dollar Baby (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 2004) , Out of Africa (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1985) , Silence of the Lambs (Academy Award Winner Best Film, 1991) . See The Heroine's Journey .

 

Criticism 5: It's cheesy as hell.

It's not cheesy. All of the greatest stories (past and present) are based on it and these are not cheesy. It's only cheesy if you tell the story wrong and this is often the result of a lack of understanding of the Hero's Journey.

 

 

Criticism 6: A lot of myths are shoehorned into the Hero's Journey.

So what? The myths are all examples to illustrate certain points, metaphors, symbolisms etc. Even with all these examples most people don't really understand the Hero's Journey. In the 510+ stage Hero's Journey, we use hundreds of examples from modern film and we are constantly being asked for more.



Criticism 7: It confuses personal growth with solving problems.

This criticism is itself a confusion. Smaller problems may not require personal growth. Some larger problems do require it. Personal growth is a transformation and the Hero's Journey is the process of transformation, hence you can link the Hero's Journey to personal growth.

 

Criticism 8: The Hero's Journey is a Hollywood construct.

It is not a Hollywood construct and applies to all the greatest stories past and present. If you analyse successful stories before the age of cinema, as we have done, you will find that they all follow the Hero's Journey pattern intricately. Shakespeare used this pattern. The stories in the Bible, the Koran, the Torah, the Vedas and the other great religious texts use this template.

 

In conclusion, none of the criticisms we have ever come across are valid and demonstrate a frightening lack of understanding. Almost without exception, criticisms are made by individuals with a very poor understanding of screenwriting, storytelling, transformation, the Hero's Journey, creativity and creative writing.

 

The single most important thing you can do to write a successful screenplay or story is gain a deep understanding of the 510+ stage Hero's Journey. Without this you're writing will lack direction, you will waste a lot of time and likely give up.

 

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